May 19, 2004

Reason #9,247,861 to Ignore the Old Media

Check out the brilliant sentence construction in a Pittsburgh Post-Gazette article from today:

Harman, 26, of Lorton, Va., was photographed with Graner behind the pyramid of naked Iraqi detainees stacked in a pyramid.

Wow! The pyramid was stacked in a pyramid? Who knew?!

Man, I could write a better friggin' article than these nimrods.

Posted by CD on May 19, 2004 09:09 PM
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Semi-Intelligent Comments

That stupid sentence was written very stupidly.

See, it's easy.

Posted by: Army NCO Guy at May 19, 2004 09:23 PM

Heh. It is kinda fun coming up with those...

I read that newspaper article in the newspaper.
Then I blogged about it on my blog.
Now I'm commenting on it in the comments.

Someone should try to write an entire story using that sentence structure. They could even write a paper about it on a piece of paper!

...I think I'm done now.

Posted by: CD at May 19, 2004 09:28 PM

And you rant a lot in your rants!

Posted by: Army NCO Guy at May 19, 2004 10:03 PM

Wow. That redundant sentence is very redundant.

(I'm sure thats been said a half dozen times by now, but for some reason, my computer has chosen not to display your comments section. It hates me.)

Posted by: Katherine at May 19, 2004 10:29 PM
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